Bought a 3D Printer
Jul 16, 2015 17:22
Yesterday, a super discount sale was held on Amazon.
My target was a MacBook Pro, and it was sold at 50% off in limited 100 units.
However, I couldn't buy it.
Instead, somehow I could buy a 3D printer called "Da Vinci Jr." at 90% off.
While the catalog price was 49,800 yen, the discount price was 4,980 yen.
I was thrilled, but after a while, I thought.
"I wonder if I wanted this?"
Tentatively, I will try to use a 3D CAD software, and create some objects by the 3D printer.
My target was a MacBook Pro, and it was sold at 50% off in limited 100 units.
However, I couldn't buy it.
Instead, somehow I could buy a 3D printer called "Da Vinci Jr." at 90% off.
While the catalog price was 49,800 yen, the discount price was 4,980 yen.
I was thrilled, but after a while, I thought.
"I wonder if I wanted this?"
Tentatively, I will try to use a 3D CAD software, and create some objects by the 3D printer.
No. 1 allabitood's correction
- Yesterday, a super discount sale was held on Amazon.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- My target was a MacBook Pro, and it was sold at 50% off in limited 100 units.
- My target was a MacBook Pro, and it was sold at 50% off, in limited with a limit of 100 units.
- However, I couldn't buy it.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Instead, somehow I could buy a 3D printer called "Da Vinci Jr." at 90% off.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- While the catalog price was 49,800 yen, the discount price was 4,980 yen.
- While the catalog price was 49,800 yen, the discounted price was 4,980 yen.
- I was thrilled, but after a while, I thought.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- "I wonder if I wanted this?"
- "I wonder if I wanted this?"
- Tentatively, I will try to use a 3D CAD software, and create some objects by the 3D printer.
- Tentatively, I will try to use a 3D CAD software, and create some objects by with the 3D printer.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
allabitood
No problem! :)
No problem! :)
No. 2 karupin's correction
- Bought a 3D Printer
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Yesterday, a super discount sale was held on Amazon.
- Yesterday, a super discounted sale was held on Amazon.
- However, I couldn't buy it.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Instead, somehow I could buy a 3D printer called "Da Vinci Jr." at 90% off.
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Somehow, I could buy bought a 3D printer called "Da Vinci Jr." at 90% off instead.
I think this flows better.
- I was thrilled, but after a while, I thought.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
Haha, great discounts are hard to resist! I was tempted to get a new Kindle during the sale but I stopped myself. My old one is still working (4 years and counting!) And speaking of 3D printers, it reminds me of this http://enablingthefuture.org/ project.
kanotown
Thank you so much for your corrections and comments!
You use things for a long time, it's nice! Actually, I bought a kindle paperwhite two months ago, but new one is now sold. So I'm slightly sad, haha.
Oh, I didn't know the project about 3D printers. It looks like so wonderful! Thank you for letting me know it. :D
Thank you so much for your corrections and comments!
You use things for a long time, it's nice! Actually, I bought a kindle paperwhite two months ago, but new one is now sold. So I'm slightly sad, haha.
Oh, I didn't know the project about 3D printers. It looks like so wonderful! Thank you for letting me know it. :D
karupin
Yes, it's got sentimental value now. Haha
The Paperwhite is awesome-looking enough. :D
Yes, it's got sentimental value now. Haha
The Paperwhite is awesome-looking enough. :D